You said the second part was coming out “in a couple days” you said that 2 fucking months ago!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-17 00:06:20Off not of. XXX – S. We want to feel, smell and taste everything. I second the emotion of ending a sentence with a period, not a camma. You’re too close to the action, as it were, to notice little things like continuity errors, word choice, and tenses. I second the emotion of ending a sentence with a period, not a camma. LEARN TO SPELL!!! LEARN TO SPELL!!! Hugh_Jardonanonymous readerReport 2012-04-16 20:30:24Good story, but needs some work on the spelling/grammar front. Snowleopard makes a good point, and don’t forget that it’s a good idea to have someone else read your work before you post it.
