Go back to school and pay attention, this time.READERReport 2008-01-03 22:54:49Good idea for the story, but man, you should have finished high school english…READERReport 2008-01-03 10:33:31Wot a shame-good concept-poor delivery. Desi xxx hd reminded me of the “borg”-trying to read it is futile”
Re-write it with paragraphs ‘n re-post
4/10
thanx«123» and you probably have a 4 inch peckerREADERReport 2008-01-04 04:21:27So poorly written, it’s not worthy of a rating.READERReport 2008-01-04 03:58:13Written by an illiterate moron. reminded me of the “borg”-trying to read it is futile”
Re-write it with paragraphs ‘n re-post
4/10
thanx«123» reminded me of the “borg”-trying to read it is futile”
Re-write it with paragraphs ‘n re-post
4/10
thanx«123» 13 comments«123»READERReport 2008-01-23 03:04:22Ive seen more graffiti on walls with more correct grammar. Go back to school and pay attention, this time.READERReport 2008-01-03 22:54:49Good idea for the story, but man, you should have finished high school english…READERReport 2008-01-03 10:33:31Wot a shame-good concept-poor delivery. and you probably have a 4 inch peckerREADERReport 2008-01-04 04:21:27So poorly written, it’s not worthy of a rating.READERReport 2008-01-04 03:58:13Written by an illiterate moron.
